Su H, Xiao L, Ren Y, Xie H, Sun XH. Effects of mindful breathing combined with sleep-inducing exercises in patients with insomnia. World J Clin Cases 2021; 9(29): 8740-8748 [PMID: 34734052 DOI: 10.12998/wjcc.v9.i29.8740]
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the aim and objective must e clearly stated.
the power analysis was missed.
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