Livazović G, Kuzmanović K. Predicting adolescent perfectionism: The role of socio-demographic traits, personal relationships, and media. World J Clin Cases 2022; 10(1): 189-204 [PMID: 35071518 DOI: 10.12998/wjcc.v10.i1.189]
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I have now read your paper and reviewed according to STROBE recognize that the manuscript addresses interesting research topic. Authors empirically sowed that Sociodemographic traits, relationships with family, peers and colleagues, as well as life satisfaction and media content interests represent significant adolescent perfectionism predictors, explaining 14%-28% of individual perfectionism.
The informed consent process for adolescents was missed.
Power analysis, which is highly suggested in research was missed.
• Please, revise such citation. Revision can lead to concise and clear text
Sutlović and Raboteg-Šarić [51] conducted a study to determine to what extent the quality of devotion to parents is associated with various aspects of perfectionism in adolescents.
Rice and Mirzadeh (2000; as cited in[51])
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(P < 0.05),
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