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Kwon YS, Park TY, Kim SE, Park Y, Lee JG, Lee SP, Kim KO, Jang HJ, Yang YJ, Cho BJ. Deep learning-based localization and lesion detection in capsule endoscopy for patients with suspected small-bowel bleeding. World J Gastroenterol 2025; 31(27): 106819 [PMID: 40741104 DOI: 10.3748/wjg.v31.i27.106819]
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July 21, 2025, 16:11
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This study aims to address the issues of time-consuming interpretation and reliance on the experience of readers when using small bowel capsule endoscopy (SBCE) to evaluate obscure gastrointestinal bleeding (OGIB). An AI model was developed to automatically distinguish the small intestine, stomach, and colon, and diagnose small intestinal abnormalities such as erosions, ulcers, vascular malformations, and bleeding. Using 87,005 images from 101 SBCE videos as the dataset, the researchers built models based on DenseNet161 and DenseNet201 convolutional neural networks, trained them through preprocessing and data augmentation, and validated their clinical utility on 32 external videos. The results showed that the model achieved over 99% accuracy in organ localization (AUC > 0.99) and 99.4% to 99.9% accuracy in lesion detection in internal testing. The AI-assisted reading time was significantly reduced to an average of 8.7 minutes (compared to 53.9 minutes traditionally), and the diagnostic performance was comparable to traditional reading. The discussion pointed out that the model significantly improved efficiency while maintaining high accuracy, but limitations included the dataset mainly consisting of Asian patients, being limited to a specific platform (MiroCam), having a small external validation sample (32 cases), incomplete coverage of lesion types, and the lack of advanced image enhancement techniques. The conclusion is that AI-assisted SBCE reading can reduce time and maintain performance, making it suitable for clinical implementation to improve consistency and efficiency. Readers believe this can help clinicians improve work efficiency and reduce misdiagnosis. Future research should expand the sample size, cover more lesion types, adapt to different platforms, and integrate advanced technologies to optimize diagnostic capabilities.
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