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Lee AY, Lim SG, Cho JY, Kim S, Lee KM, Shin SJ, Noh CK, Lee GH, Hur H, Han SU, Son SY, Song JH. Comparison of treatment strategies for submucosal tumors originating from the muscularis propria at esophagogastric junction or cardia. World J Gastroenterol 2025; 31(23): 106261 [PMID: 40575341 DOI: 10.3748/wjg.v31.i23.106261]
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This retrospective study aims to compare the feasibility, resection rates, and complications of endoscopic submucosal dissection (ESD) and submucosal tunneling endoscopic resection (STER) to laparoscopic wedge resection (LWR) in the treatment of subepithelial lesions (SELs) arising from the muscularis propria at the esophagogastric junction (EGJ) or gastric cardia. Lee et al. show that ESD, STER, and LWR are all feasible methods for resecting these lesions. Interestingly, the R0 resection rate is lower for ESD and especially STER when compared to LWR, however this may be related to the greater proportion of leiomyomas found in the ESD and STER groups, and leiomyomas are typically benign with very low chance for progression to malignancy. It is unclear if these lesions were sampled with EUS-guided fine needle biopsy prior to deciding on ESD, STER, or LWR, as achieving en bloc resection is more important for lesions with malignant potential such as GIST. Nevertheless this study shows that endoscopic resection methods such as ESD and STER are viable alternatives to surgical resection of SELs at the EGJ and gastric cardia. It is important for patients to have a complete pre-procedural workup including EUS, fine needle biopsy when possible, and CT chest and abdomen prior to embarking on resection.
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The retrospective study on Comparison of treatment strategies for submucosal tumors originating from the muscularis propria at esophagogastric junction or cardia by Lee AY, Lim SG, Cho JY, Kim S, Lee KM, Shin SJ, Noh CK, Lee GH, Hur H, Han SU, Son SY, Song JH is well conducted and written.  It very nicely describes the three techniques ESD, STER and LSW for lesions of the esophagus with excellent illustrations of all the three techniques with figures. It paves the path for feasibility of further studies will large number of sample size.
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Submitted on:
June 20, 2025, 12:15
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Reader Comments:
This study compares endoscopic submucosal dissection, submucosal tunneling endoscopic resection, and laparoscopic wedge resection for submucosal tumors originating from the muscularis propria at the esophagogastric junction and cardia. Despite technical challenges, all methods demonstrated safety, practicality, and high en bloc resection rates, with laparoscopic wedge resection showing superior microscopic complete resection. Recurrence rates were comparable across methods, even for high-risk gastrointestinal stromal tumors. These findings underscore the feasibility of minimally invasive approaches for treating submucosal tumors in challenging anatomical locations, advancing diagnostic precision and treatment efficacy while minimizing patient burden.
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