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Shi PN, Song ZZ, He XN, Hong JM. Evaluation of scoring systems and hematological parameters in the severity stratification of early-phase acute pancreatitis. World J Gastroenterol 2025; 31(15): 105236 [PMID: 40309234 DOI: 10.3748/wjg.v31.i15.105236]
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This study addresses a critical gap in acute pancreatitis management by systematically comparing established scoring systems with novel hematological markers. The focus on early-phase severity stratification aligns with clinical urgency, as delayed interventions in severe AP significantly worsen outcomes. The inclusion of 463 patients across severity categories provides sufficient statistical power. The use of multivariate logistic regression to identify independent predictors and AUC comparisons for ROC analyses strengthens validity. Notably, the combined PNI48 + Ranson model achieved an AUC of 0.936, outperforming individual parameters. However, the study has several issues that need to be addressed. 1) While CTSI showed the highest individual AUC, its reliance on CT imaging (performed 2–5 days post-admission) limits utility in hyperacute settings. The BISAP score’s superiority over APACHE II/SOFA within 24 h is consistent with prior literature , but the lack of comparison with newer tools is a missed opportunity. 2) The study’s retrospective nature introduces risks of selection bias, particularly in excluding patients with brief hospital stays (<48 h), who may represent early mortality or rapid recovery cases. External validation using multicenter cohorts is essential to confirm generalizability. 3) Most parameters (e.g., CRP48, PNI48) were assessed at fixed intervals. Dynamic trends in markers like CRP or calcium—critical for real-time clinical decision-making—were overlooked. Serial measurements could enhance predictive accuracy, as shown in studies of procalcitonin kinetics. In conclusion, this study provides valuable insights into a multimodal approach for AP severity prediction, with PNI48 emerging as a novel, nutrition-centric biomarker. However, its retrospective design and limited temporal resolution restrict immediate clinical applicability. Methodological refinements and external validation will be critical to translate these findings into practice.
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Reader Comments:
This article presents a series of clinically practical and easily obtainable diagnostic indices, enabling medical professionals to more accurately evaluate patient conditions in real-world clinical settings. These indicators are particularly valuable for the early diagnosis and severity assessment of pancreatitis, offering crucial guidance for subsequent treatment decisions. By incorporating these measurable parameters into routine clinical practice, healthcare providers can enhance diagnostic efficiency, improve risk stratification, and facilitate timely therapeutic interventions. The systematic application of these indices not only supports evidence-based medical decision-making but also contributes to standardized patient management protocols, ultimately leading to better clinical outcomes in pancreatitis care.
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